Is This a bad Idea? (NOT CAR RELATED) EDIT!

Earlier, I talked about getting friend-zoned. I already have had enough. I'm thinking about sending this to her.. what do you think? Car is added because I needed something to get attention. EDIT: I should add that she is a huge literacy buff and loves reading and writing; long lovey things like this are her favorite! » 3/06/14 10:59pm 3/06/14 10:59pm