Feedback Requested

Hey everyone, I have a bunch more articles in the works and while I have been somewhat successful with my previous pieces it is always good to take a step back and get some constructive criticism. So fellow Opponauts, and if any FP editor wants to chime in, what can I do better? Is there anything you want more of, less of? Adjustments to tone or style? Fire away! (carporn for your troubles)

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